Now standing
in the middle of my life
at the end of linear history and culture
at the end of my genetic line.
Then is found the memory
of the early days' light.
The perspective gives an impression of size and distance; good that there are some more organic shapes in with the purely geometrical ones, that creates interest. The frame is distracting.
The muted colors do give a feeling of faded memory.
Somehow I'm reminded of the scene in Forbidden Planet, when they're inside the Krell planetary machine; the massive scale and mysterious works.
get rid of the black/white bars around it-they eat out whatever is on inside and take all the attention-they are too big, too pure and too much of a contrast, people wont be able to fully appreciate your work as long as its inside them - just my thoughts.
Also your work is wonderful-its gentle, detailed and has wonderful tones, it can't be put together with pure white and black, at least not in this manner.
DAYM!!!
The muted colors do give a feeling of faded memory.
Somehow I'm reminded of the scene in Forbidden Planet, when they're inside the Krell planetary machine; the massive scale and mysterious works.
great sentences.
Also your work is wonderful-its gentle, detailed and has wonderful tones, it can't be put together with pure white and black, at least not in this manner.